10:00am
Just got here. Getting settled in my dorm room. Will email you later.
Dad
10:22am
Glad you’re safe.
Mom
10:23am
So glad you got there safely!
So Far
To: pbarker@hotmail.com, sbarker@hotmail.com
From: MelanieB@gmail.com
Hi, Mom & Dad!
Hope you’re fine. It’s been a crazy week here. My roommate JoJo is a nice girl. She’s majoring in economics. Hopefully she can help me with my math classes! You know that’s always been my hardest subject. I got my course schedule yesterday. Three of my classes are in the afternoon, and the fourth is in the morning, so it’s not too bad. Tomorrow I’m going to apply for the work-study program. If I get in, I’ll probably be working at the bookstore. At least that’s what I hope. I’ll write more soon.
Love you,
Mellie
From: sbarker@hotmail.com
Re: So Far
Hi, Sweetie,
So glad to hear you’re getting settled in. It’s good to hear you and your roommate get along. That makes such a difference. Let us know when you find out about your work-study job. Not much is going on around here. Your dad is leaving for that meeting in San Francisco tomorrow. He’ll be gone three nights. And I’m busy on that new company project. Oh, before I forget, check your bank balance when you have a chance. I sent some money, and I want to make sure it transferred. Please, don’t tell your dad, OK? You know how he’s been lately about money. Hope it helps!
Love,
Mom
8:15pm
Money came through, Mom! Thank you! ❤️
8:21pm
Oh, good!
Catching Up
To: sbarker@hotmail.com, pbarker@hotmail.com
From: MelanieB@gmail.com
Hi!
So, classes are going well so far. I haven’t had any exams yet, but I’m getting the assignments all done. Most of my profs are good, too. There’s only one I’m not crazy about. And I joined a study group for chemistry. I’m going to need their help! Work-study gave me the bookstore job! I work ten hours a week, which isn’t much, but it helps. Dad, I know you kept talking about how much I cost, but I’m working really hard. I promise. I’ll write soon.
Love you,
Mellie
From: sbarker@hotmail.com
Re: Catching Up
Hi, Sweetie,
I got that silly picture you sent. It was hilarious! It looked like you had a good time at that football game. And it seems like you’re having a good semester so far. I do have some bad news. We won’t be coming out there for Parents’ Weekend. What with the cost of travel and hotels, your father just doesn’t want to spend the money. Sorry, but there was nothing I could do. But as he says, it’s not that long until Thanksgiving break, so we’ll see you then.
Love you,
Mom
3:40pm
Mom, I just got an email from the Registrar’s Office. They said my tuition and lab fees payments didn’t go through! Do you know what happened? I don’t know what to do! What if they expel me!
3:43pm
For now, don’t panic. I’ll try to Venmo you the money tonight.
Then you can make the payment tomorrow. Will that work?
3:46pm
That should work. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your Chase Account
From: Customer Service – Account XXXXXX0374
To: sbarker@hotmail.com
Dear Ms. Barker:
We have received a request to close your account. Based on that request, your account will be closed as of 12:00am, Monday, October 13th. Please contact Customer Service if you have any questions. It has been a pleasure serving you, and we hope to be your choice for banking in the future.
Sincerely,
Customer Service Team
Chase
(800) 935-9935
From: sparker@hotmail.com
Hi, Tricia,
I’m really sorry, but I won’t able to get together for our lake cabin weekend this time. You know Pete’s never been one for the lake, which was fine. I didn’t mind going myself or with Mellie. Now Pete says he always hated me going to the cabin and doesn’t want me to go any more. On top of that, he’s closed our joint account! Honestly, this is just one in a long string of things that’s been happening, and I’m at the end of my rope. It never used to be this bad before, but it is now. I don’t know what I’m going to do, but thanks for listening. I’ll call you later this week and we can talk. You’re the best big sister ever!
Love you,
Sarah
From: MelanieB@gmail.com
Dad, I just want to know why. You didn’t tell me why when you called last night. I’m getting good grades, I’m keeping my job, I’m not even drinking a lot or dating. Why are you telling me I have to come home? You told me I don’t need a college education to get a job, but you never said I couldn’t go, either. You even let me apply. I know you talked about the money, but still. Do you really want me to give all this up? Please answer this or call me!
9:30pm
Mom, Dad hasn’t answered my email. I begged him to tell me what happened, but he just left me a phone message and said he’s coming this weekend to pick up my stuff. Can’t you please at least talk to him? I’m really losing it here! Please help!
9:40pm
It’s not you. I promise. And don’t worry, sweetie.
Don’t worry at all. I’m going to take care of everything.
9:50pm
How are you going to do that?
9:58pm
I’ll explain everything when I see you at Parents’ Weekend.
Don’t worry about anything.
8:57am
Dad, did Mom talk to you? Are you going to let me stay? I really need to know.
9:45am
Dad, did you get my text?
10:30am
Dad?
Ohh, I hope it was a slow-acting, painful poison! 😉 Great story!
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Thanks, FictionFan! 😊 And you know, I’m not too fond of that father, myself…
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An interesting technique using e-mails, Margot. It makes it lively. The father got what he deserved but I would like a follow up. What really happened to him? How did the mother explain his lack of communicating to his daughter?
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Thanks, Carol. I’m glad you thought the approach worked. I think it’s sometimes nice to have a change of pace when it comes to writing (and reading, for that matter). As for a follow up? I may do one. I hadn’t thought about it, but I may. Thanks for the idea!
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That was a very effective story, Margot. I enjoyed it
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Thanks very much, Tracy!
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Oh, that’s *really* dark Margot!!!! Very clever done, letting the reader fill in what’s happening behind to message – most impressive!!
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Thank you so much, KBR!! I’m so very glad you thought the story worked! And yes, sometimes crime writers do go very dark…
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Oh my goodness!
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Yes, I think it’s that sort of story, Christine. I’m glad it reached out and got you; as you know, for a crime writer, that matters.
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Very interesting.
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Thanks, Neeru
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