Most of us want to keep at least some things private, and most of us allow others their privacy, too. But sometimes, by accident, we find out something weβre not meant to know. That can be awkward and embarrassing all around. In crime fiction, it can also lead to some dangerous places. But even when it doesnβt, those awkward moments can make for interesting plot points or even comic relief.
In Agatha Christieβs Five Little Pigs, Carla Lemarchant hires Hercule Poirot to re-investigate the sixteen-year-old poisoning murder of her father, famous painter Amyas Crale. At the time, Craleβs wife Caroline was suspected. In fact, she was arrested, tried, and convicted in the matter, and died in prison a year later. But Carla believes her mother was innocent, and wants to prove it. Poirot interviews the people who were present at the time of the killing and in the days leading up to it. He also has each witness write a personal account of the events. From that information, he works out who the killer really was. One of the witnesses is Carolineβs half-sister Angela Warren, who was a teenager at the time of the murder. She recounts a story in which she accidentally saw Caroline leaving Philip Blakeβs room. It didnβt register with her at the time, but she never forgot that it happened. And that raises some interesting questions about Blakeβs motive.
Ellery Queenβs The Fourth Side of the Triangle is the story of the McKell family. Successful businessman Ashton McKell is involved with famous dress designer Sheila Grey. When his son Dane finds out about it, thereβs real awkwardness and anger between father and son. Dane determines to meet this βother womanβ in his fatherβs life, and unexpectedly finds himself attracted to her. The two begin a relationship, but then, Sheila is murdered. Inspector Richard Queen is assigned to the case and, naturally, his soon Ellery takes an interest. As the investigation continues, the Queens learn of the McKell familyβs relationship with the victim. Both McKell men fall under suspicion, as does Ashton Mckellβs wife, Lutetia. Itβs a difficult case, and itβs not solved until Ellery Queen makes sense of cryptic clue that Sheila left behind.
Sometimes, finding out someone elseβs private business can be very dangerous β even deadly. Thatβs what we find in Ruth Rendellβs A Judgement in Stone. The wealthy and educated Coverdale family decides to hire a new housekeeper. Eunice Parchman applies for the position and is quickly hired. The Coverdales donβt take the time to thoroughly vet their new employee, but things go well enough at first. But Eunice is hiding a secret β something she doesnβt want anyone to know. As long as no-one in the family finds out that secret, thereβs no problem. But then, a member of the family accidentally learns what it is. Thatβs enough to seal the familyβs death warrant, and it leads to disaster for everyone.
An accidental discovery leads to disaster in Beryl Bainbridgeβs Harriet Said, too. As that novel begins, itβs summer in a quiet Lancashire coastal village, and the unnamed narrator (a thirteen-year-old girl) is waiting for her friend Harriet to return from a trip to Wales. A bit at loose ends, the narrator strikes up a friendship with Peter Biggs. Heβs an unhappily married, middle-aged man at loose ends himself. The narrator begins to feel the first stirrings of hormones, but dares not do anything about it until Harriet comes back. When she returns. Harriet claims that the narrator is too emotionally close to the situation, and that they should observe Biggs objectively, and record their observations as they have other experiences. The narrator reluctantly agrees, and the two girls start to spy on the Biggs home. One night theyβre watching Biggs when they see something private β something they should not have seen. The girls revise their plans, and everything takes a horrible and tragic turn.
Of course, accidentally finding out something private doesnβt always have tragic results. For instance, Peter Templeβs Bad Debts introduces Melbourne-based sometimes-attorney and PI Jack Irish. Heβs good at finding people who donβt want to be found, and thatβs what heβs doing as the novel begins. Heβs been hired by a debt collection agency to track down a man named Eddie Dollery. He finds the man, and when he does, he makes an interesting discovery:
ββ¦black underwear, some of it leather, and red suspender belts.β
He also finds several ladiesβ uniforms from different occupations. Irish takes it in stride, but itβs an awkward moment. Later, he has a conversation with the man who hired him:
ββWhatβs on the premises?β
βLadiesβ uniforms.β
Wooten laughed again. βThatβs one of the habits.ββ
Irishβs attention soon turns to the case thatβs the main focus of the novel: the murder of a former client. But this makes for an interesting beginning to the novel.
Sometimes people find out things, even if they werenβt snooping or prying. And when that happens, it can be awkward, embarrassing β or worse. However they end up, such moments can add a layer to a crime novel. Which ones have stayed with you?
*NOTE: The title of this post is a line from the Mighty Lemon Dropsβ Out of Hand.
Hmm, I feel I should be able to think of a million examples of things seen when they shouldn’t have been, but my mind is completely blank! I enjoyed your examples though, and often enjoy the strange things investigators turn up when conducting a search. Always leaves me feeling that I should have a clear-out… π
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Thanks for the kind words, FictionFan. And you know, I’ve thought, too, that it might be a good idea to re-think some of my possessions… π
It’s funny you’d mention coming up with examples. I have to confess it took me a bit of time. I thought of one, and then thought, ‘Oh, this happens all the time in the genre. This ought to be easy.’ Famous last words…
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Margot: I am not sure if Mickey Haller and an LAPD officer finding a body in the trunk of Mickey’s Lincoln Town Car during a routine traffic stop counts but it set up the whole plot in The Law of Innocence by Michael Connelly.
Becks Unworth, in The Power Couple by Alex Berenson unexpectedly discovers an app sold by her husband, Bri, is no longer operational. A coverup unravels.
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Thanks, Bill, for those examples. Finding that body in Mickey’s Town Car may not be exactly a ‘walk in on’ sort of moment, but it’s certainly an unexpected discovery! And I give Connelly credit for using it to set up the novel. And your example from The Power Couple shows that even within a marriage, people can make accidental discoveries about each other.
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Struggling for examples I’m afraid. Thanks for reminding me of Peter Temple.
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Temple wrote some fantastic novels, Col. He is sorely missed…
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